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  So yeah(Hey this my first reader insert, I hope you guys like. Something I did in my free time and please give me some feedback, if you guys like I might just continue writing. So yeah enjoy~)

  "F/N!!!!" I woke up screaming. I had an awful nightmare that my precious (F/N) decided to leave me for someone else. The room was still dark so I start patting the sides to make sure she was still there. I finally felt her form and immediately hug it.
  "Nghh..." (F/N) groaned and buried her face in the pillow. I held her tighter and take in her smell. 'Oh god, I can't imagine a day without her,' I thought, but then I begin to wonder. 'Why does she love me?' I glance over her figure and push some hair strands out of her peaceful face. 'I mean seriously dude~She's like a perfect 10! I gotta know!'
  I proceed to nudge her, "(F/N), (F/N)." Nothing. I start poking her squishy face to get a reaction. "(F/N), (F/N)," I repeat and I could feel her face twitch. "(F/N), (N)."/F
  "Stawwwp~" (F/N) protested as she she slaps my hand away.
  "(F/N), please," I I pout. She glances at me squinting and sighs.
  "Fine," she mumbles not moving, still nuzzling her face in her pillow.
  "Why do you love me?" I ask trying to sound serious, but end up sounding like a reprimanded child.
  "Really Al," she steals a quick glance at the clock on our nightstand, "It's 4 in the morning and you wake me up for-" Before she can finish she looks at me for a second. "You're great in bed, I dunno," she replies heading back to sleep.
  "Oh okay, wait WHAT?!" I state in disbelief. She starts giggling and turns to give me a soft smile. I look at her and she reaches to pull down my face to her eye level. She stares at me for awhile. I couldn't help but blush at how close she held me. I was about to close the gap between us when she started to speak.
  "Because, you're my hero. And only mine," she says with a huge grin. I flash a huge smile and pull her into a bear hug. I kiss her forehead multiple times and hear her muffled giggles. I felt a bit adventurous and move my hand to her butt. "Alfred!" She squeals but doesn't pull away. I dive in and passionately kiss her. When separated we were left gasping air.
  "Now its my turnto tell you why I love you."
It's just a little story I made during class. Hope you guys like and feel free to give me feedback. Sorry America is a bit OCC but I tried my best :)
I don't own Hetalia
And I think America owns you...
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roseyohrt Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
can there be a part 2 lemon please?    Meow :3 :happybounce: Woohooooo! 
WillowWalker45 Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Will there be a "citrusy" part 2, if you know what I mean? *joey's "how you doin" face from friends*
wxzhenghoppytruffles Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my face is...
I'm looking at your icon and I just imagine Kyoya saying that really annoyedly while Tamaki is just sitting in front of him poking his face 
wxzhenghoppytruffles Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
pfft, haha, that would make a lot of sense.
transformicerawks11 Sep 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're great in bed, I dunno,
Aww heeeeelllll naw!
gothygermanchick Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
PART TWO !! PLEASE !! AND IT BETTER BE A LEMON!! [ yeah that's right , I have a pervie side ] :iconohyoublushplz: :D (Big Grin) I am a dummy! Meow :3 Giggle 
CarsonMasterson Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like a reader with some nerve, I actually plan on doing sooo honhon~
inocentHorror Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Short and perfect
awww! so cute!
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