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  So yeah(Hey this my first reader insert, I hope you guys like. Something I did in my free time and please give me some feedback, if you guys like I might just continue writing. So yeah enjoy~)

  "F/N!!!!" I woke up screaming. I had an awful nightmare that my precious (F/N) decided to leave me for someone else. The room was still dark so I start patting the sides to make sure she was still there. I finally felt her form and immediately hug it.
  "Nghh..." (F/N) groaned and buried her face in the pillow. I held her tighter and take in her smell. 'Oh god, I can't imagine a day without her,' I thought, but then I begin to wonder. 'Why does she love me?' I glance over her figure and push some hair strands out of her peaceful face. 'I mean seriously dude~She's like a perfect 10! I gotta know!'
  I proceed to nudge her, "(F/N), (F/N)." Nothing. I start poking her squishy face to get a reaction. "(F/N), (F/N)," I repeat and I could feel her face twitch. "(F/N), (N)."/F
  "Stawwwp~" (F/N) protested as she she slaps my hand away.
  "(F/N), please," I I pout. She glances at me squinting and sighs.
  "Fine," she mumbles not moving, still nuzzling her face in her pillow.
  "Why do you love me?" I ask trying to sound serious, but end up sounding like a reprimanded child.
  "Really Al," she steals a quick glance at the clock on our nightstand, "It's 4 in the morning and you wake me up for-" Before she can finish she looks at me for a second. "You're great in bed, I dunno," she replies heading back to sleep.
  "Oh okay, wait WHAT?!" I state in disbelief. She starts giggling and turns to give me a soft smile. I look at her and she reaches to pull down my face to her eye level. She stares at me for awhile. I couldn't help but blush at how close she held me. I was about to close the gap between us when she started to speak.
  "Because, you're my hero. And only mine," she says with a huge grin. I flash a huge smile and pull her into a bear hug. I kiss her forehead multiple times and hear her muffled giggles. I felt a bit adventurous and move my hand to her butt. "Alfred!" She squeals but doesn't pull away. I dive in and passionately kiss her. When separated we were left gasping air.
  "Now its my turnto tell you why I love you."
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It's just a little story I made during class. Hope you guys like and feel free to give me feedback. Sorry America is a bit OCC but I tried my best :)
I don't own Hetalia
And I think America owns you...
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Mood: Love ~BlueLight01 May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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~animelover-8 Apr 27, 2013  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kawaii and not OOC at all I love him
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LOL "You're great in bed, I dunno" XDDDDD LAUGHING SOOO HARD.
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:iconsrtingoffate:
Aww this is a super cute story
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:iconhetalialover76:
America 100% owns me!!!!!
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:iconhetalialover76:
great story btw
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*SaphyrreVargas Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
So why does America love me? Haha
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~TiniEve Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very nice for your first reader insert
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*CrazyFanGirlOne Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Prussia owns my vitals, Russia owns my soul,Romania owns my blood, Scotland owns my mind and the rest goes to 2p FACE.....this time
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Alfred,
Roses are red;
Violets are blue;
It's four in the morning;
Lets go back to sleep be for I fruking kill you.
Love you dearest~
XOXO
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