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  So yeah(Hey this my first reader insert, I hope you guys like. Something I did in my free time and please give me some feedback, if you guys like I might just continue writing. So yeah enjoy~)

  "F/N!!!!" I woke up screaming. I had an awful nightmare that my precious (F/N) decided to leave me for someone else. The room was still dark so I start patting the sides to make sure she was still there. I finally felt her form and immediately hug it.
  "Nghh..." (F/N) groaned and buried her face in the pillow. I held her tighter and take in her smell. 'Oh god, I can't imagine a day without her,' I thought, but then I begin to wonder. 'Why does she love me?' I glance over her figure and push some hair strands out of her peaceful face. 'I mean seriously dude~She's like a perfect 10! I gotta know!'
  I proceed to nudge her, "(F/N), (F/N)." Nothing. I start poking her squishy face to get a reaction. "(F/N), (F/N)," I repeat and I could feel her face twitch. "(F/N), (N)."/F
  "Stawwwp~" (F/N) protested as she she slaps my hand away.
  "(F/N), please," I I pout. She glances at me squinting and sighs.
  "Fine," she mumbles not moving, still nuzzling her face in her pillow.
  "Why do you love me?" I ask trying to sound serious, but end up sounding like a reprimanded child.
  "Really Al," she steals a quick glance at the clock on our nightstand, "It's 4 in the morning and you wake me up for-" Before she can finish she looks at me for a second. "You're great in bed, I dunno," she replies heading back to sleep.
  "Oh okay, wait WHAT?!" I state in disbelief. She starts giggling and turns to give me a soft smile. I look at her and she reaches to pull down my face to her eye level. She stares at me for awhile. I couldn't help but blush at how close she held me. I was about to close the gap between us when she started to speak.
  "Because, you're my hero. And only mine," she says with a huge grin. I flash a huge smile and pull her into a bear hug. I kiss her forehead multiple times and hear her muffled giggles. I felt a bit adventurous and move my hand to her butt. "Alfred!" She squeals but doesn't pull away. I dive in and passionately kiss her. When separated we were left gasping air.
  "Now its my turnto tell you why I love you."
It's just a little story I made during class. Hope you guys like and feel free to give me feedback. Sorry America is a bit OCC but I tried my best :)
I don't own Hetalia
And I think America owns you...
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Thepersonwhotries1 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
Yakow.....this reminds me of the song Amnesia
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Meowhug17 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Student Filmographer
Al's great in bed? Didn't see that coming! Lol
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AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
That moment Alfred realizes what you said xD
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magicalcandyrainbow Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
FUCK THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD!!!! i get so scared when i read these... so u dont understand it,i will put it ina diff laguage so ur welcome 

điều này là không một trò đùa! mang trên đọc! hoặc bạn sẽ chết, cũng nếu bạn chỉ nhìn tại các lời cảnh báo! ONCE THERE WS Một Little CÔ GÁI GỌI Clarissa, SHE WS 10 NĂM OLD VÀ SHE SỐNG IN Một TÂM THẦN BỆNH VIỆN, BEACUSE SHE Giết HER MUM VÀ DAD. SHE GOT SO BAD SHE BẮT ĐẦU TO KILL ALL THE NHÂN VIÊN IN THE BỆNH VIỆN SO THE CHÍNH PHỦ QUYẾT ĐỊNH RẰNG THE NHẤT IDEA WS TO GET RID HÀNH HER SO HỌ SET UP Một ĐẶC BIỆT PHÒNG TO KILL HER, AS Nhân đạo AS THỂ NHƯNG IT Đã đi RONG THE MÁY HỌ WERE USEING Đã đi WRONG. VÀ SHE WS SAT THERE IN Sự đau đớn CHO GIỜ Cho đến SHE Cuối cùng CHẾT. DOANH NGHIỆP EVERY TUẦN ON THE NGÀY HÀNH HER DEATH SHE RETURNS TO THE NGƯỜI RẰNG READS NÀY THƯ, ON Một Thứ Hai ĐÊM AT 00:00 SHE KREEPS INTO BẠN PHÒNG VÀ Kills BẠN, NHƯNG Từ từ VÀ Đau đớn Từ từ CẮT Khác nhau TÙNG HÀNH UR BODY THEN ĐỒNG HỒ BẠN Chảy máu TO DEATH IF BẠN DONT GỬI NÀY TO 20 DÂN BY MIDNIGHT SHELL BE Comeing TO KILL BẠN! GỬI IT SO SHE HAS KHÁC TẢI HÀNH DÂN TO GET VÀ Quên GIỚI BẠN DONT BELVE ME HEY? VÍ DỤ 1: JENNY Didnt belive này VÀ XÓA IT KHÔNG ĐỌC NGAY CẢ THE THING WHOLE! Một NGÀY FEW LATER ON THE NIGHT thứ hai SHE bị đánh thức BYE LOUDE tiếng bước chân và BREETHING HEAVY THERE WAS Clarissa đứng đó với một con dao HUGE VÀ CŨNG LÀ LỊCH SỬ JENNY DOANH NGHIỆP
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EpicCatBomb Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015   Digital Artist
JUST BECAUSE ITS IN ANOTHER LANGUAGE IT DOESNT MAKE IT ANY BETTER.

JESUS CHRIST.
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Whybot221 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
So cute
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anna13542 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
this
is
not
a
joke!
carry
on
reading!
or
you
will
die,
even
if
you
only
looked
at
the
word
warning!


ONCE
THERE
WAS
A
LITTLE
GIRL
CALLED
CLARISSA,
SHE
WAS
10
YEARS
OLD
AND
SHE
LIVED
IN
A
MENTAL
HOSPITAL,
BEACUSE
SHE
KILLED
HER
MUM
AND
DAD.








SHE
GOT
SO
BAD
SHE
STARTED
TO
KILL
ALL
THE
STAFF
IN
THE
HOSPITAL
SO
THE
GOVERMENT
DECIDED
THAT
THE
BEST
IDEA
WAS
TO
GET
RID
OF
HER
SO
THEY
SET
UP
A
SPECIAL
ROOM
TO
KILL
HER,
AS
HUMANE
AS
POSSIBLE
BUT
IT
WENT
RONG
THE
MACHINE
THEY
WERE
USEING
WENT
WRONG.








AND
SHE
WAS
SAT
THERE
IN
AGONY
FOR
HOURS
UNTILL
SHE
FINALLY
DIED.








NOW
EVERY
WEEK
ON
THE
DAY
OF
HER
DEATH
SHE
RETURNS
TO THE
PERSON
THAT
READS
THIS
LETTER,
ON
A
MONDAY
NIGHT
AT
12:00
SHE
KREEPS
INTO
YOUR
ROOM
AND
KILLS
YOU,
BUT
SLOWLY
AND
PAINFULLY
SLOWLY
CUTTING
DIFFRENT
PARTS
OF
UR
BODY
THEN
WATCHES
YOU
BLEED
TO
DEATH
IF
YOU
DONT
SEND
THIS
TO
20
PEOPLE
BY
MIDNIGHT
SHELL
BE
COMEING
TO KILL
YOU!
SEND
IT
SO
SHE
HAS
ANOTHER
LOAD
OF
PEOPLE
TO
GET
AND
FORGETS
ABOUT
YOU
DONT
BELVE ME
HEY?

EXAMPLE
1:
JENNY
DIDNT BELIVE THIS AND DELETED IT WITHOUT EVEN READING THE WHOLE THING! A FEW DAYS LATER ON THE MONDAY NIGHT SHE WAS WOKEN UP BYE LOUDE FOOTSTEPS AND HEAVY BREETHING THERE WAS CLARISSA STANDING THERE WITH A HUGE KNIFE AND WELL JENNY IS HISTORY NOW
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EpicCatBomb Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015   Digital Artist
THIS STUFF CLOGS UP THE AUTHORS GODDAMN INBOX YOU SHIT.
DO YOU KNOW HOW HAPPY PEOPLE GET WHEN THEY SEE A MESSAGE IN THEIR INBOX? IS IT A NICE COMMENT ABOUT THEIR ART? THEIR STORY? NOPE, ITS MORE FUCKING USELESS TIME CONSUMING CHAINMAIL.
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haruhi-chan01 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Than I'll send it to FIFTY people and also buy more security alarms. And reAd more fanfiction
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That... Seems... Like something I would say... Because when I want to, I—sad to say this, and ashamed—can be like Francis...
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iloverochu666 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Artist
PART TWO!!!
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Radioactive-Potato Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
ERMIGAWD SO FLUFFEH~! Touko Fukawa (Togami Fangirling) [V2] 
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roseyohrt Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
can there be a part 2 lemon please?    Meow :3 :happybounce: Woohooooo! 
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WillowWalker45 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Will there be a "citrusy" part 2, if you know what I mean? *joey's "how you doin" face from friends*
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wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my face is...
squishy???
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angel-of-damnation Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'm looking at your icon and I just imagine Kyoya saying that really annoyedly while Tamaki is just sitting in front of him poking his face 
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canisMajor12 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
That is the best interpretation I've ever heard.
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wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
pfft, haha, that would make a lot of sense.
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transformicerawks11 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're great in bed, I dunno,
Aww heeeeelllll naw!
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gothygermanchick Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
PART TWO !! PLEASE !! AND IT BETTER BE A LEMON!! [ yeah that's right , I have a pervie side ] :iconohyoublushplz: :D (Big Grin) I am a dummy! Meow :3 Giggle 
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CarsonMasterson Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like a reader with some nerve, I actually plan on doing sooo honhon~
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inocentHorror Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Short and perfect
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PACKWOMEN12 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student
awww! so cute!
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momopeach101 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Alfred:i love you cuz of your ass
me: oh...okay *stares at alfred like he's a pervert*
Alfred:only kidding i-
me: you better have been
Alfred: i love you cuz you like totally awesome and beautiful. your totally perfect.
me:*blushes insanely* thank you *kisses his cheek*
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsuperkawaiiplz:
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animelover-8 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kawaii and not OOC at all I love him
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CielPhantomhivelove1 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
LOL "You're great in bed, I dunno" XDDDDD LAUGHING SOOO HARD.
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SoundSoul1 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist
I THIRD THIS COMMENT (IF I HAD A FAVE COMMENT BUTTON I WOULD FAVE THIS IMMEDIATELY)
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CielPhantomhivelove1 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
XD
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SoundSoul1 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist
TRUE STORY, MAN. :)
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CielPhantomhivelove1 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
GOTT, YOUR TOO FUNNY XD
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SoundSoul1 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist
I KNOW. BECAUSE I CREATED NYAN PUFFINS (TRUE STORY BRO, EVEN ASK kittyrust)
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CielPhantomhivelove1 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
XDDDDD
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SoundSoul1 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist
YOU ARE JUST JELLY THAT THE VOICES DON'T SPEAK TO YOU (JK)
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AdenaXAmbrose Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
I SECOND THIS COMMENT!
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:iconcielphantomhivelove1:
XD
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SrtingOfFate Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Aww this is a super cute story
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Hetalialover76 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
America 100% owns me!!!!!
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Hetalialover76 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
great story btw
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
So why does America love me? Haha
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very nice for your first reader insert
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TheSimpleCartoonist Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Prussia owns my vitals, Russia owns my soul,Romania owns my blood, Scotland owns my mind and the rest goes to 2p FACE.....this time
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littlelepracaun Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Alfred,
Roses are red;
Violets are blue;
It's four in the morning;
Lets go back to sleep be for I fruking kill you.
Love you dearest~
XOXO
Reader
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mskoolkatiful Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg lol XD I can't stop laughing at this comment!!
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Rish-36-Bitch Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Let me show why I love you *goes down into sheets*

:iconamericawhyplz::iconsaysplz: OH WTF ARE YOU DOING DOWN THERE
:iconrish-36-bitch::iconsaysplz: I love you because....I LURV YO PANTS *takes pants and runs :iconherpderpplz:
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kittykatluvur777 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconnuplz: !! not the pants
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Rish-36-Bitch Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconduhplz: YES THEY BE MY PANTS NOW FJSDALKFJLSKJF
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kittykatluvur777 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconkittykatluvur777plz: :iconsaysplz: nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! not the pantz! anything bu- okay take the friggin pants -_-
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Rish-36-Bitch Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrish-36-bitch::iconsaysplz: Fine take tzhe pants but I get Nantucket!!
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kittykatluvur777 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
okay ^-^
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